MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 26 Unreliable narrattor

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Isaac Yu

May 27, 2013

Unreliable narrator

  There are a lot of different kinds of narrator, some of them are able to trust, but some of the narrators are unreliable, why?

  The reason why we think they are unreliable is because of the way they talking, we can looking at the conversation of the narrator with the other character, if most of the time the conversation speak from the narrator are include a lot of personal opinion, I think that narrator is unreliable, because they didn’t tell you the truth, he or she is talking about his or her feeling about something or some person, for example in the Raymond’s Run, the narrator, Sqeaky, she always use a lot of word to describe the person or girls she don’t like, I think she can be the unreliable character.

Because according to her information we only can know the feeling from her, we can’t know the other people’s feeling, which is unsure.

  The reason why we have unreliable narrator is because, sometime the narrator want to describe his or her own feeling about something or some people, instead of telling the story, when you see the book or article which is talking about something about someone, the narrator is unreliable, because they are talking about their own feeling which is first person not third person, and we only can know the thing from the narrator.

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 28 the tale tell heart

My tell tale heart

  Loud, loud, loud, loud, why the noisy sound cannot go away, it blows my mind, confuse my brain, almost turn me to the hell.

  How is that possible for the police cannot heard the sound, why are they look so clam, didn’t they heard the sound, it is as loud as the bomb. I stand up and walk to my room, try to find a very calm place to take a rest, I close my eyes, try to ignore the sound, but it still here, still in my ear, finally I can’t handle it any more, I take out a hammer, walk into the room stealthily, I go near to the first police, and I use the rest of the power to punch those annoying police, they know I kill the old man, they knew it, suddenly the other two police take out there pistol, they shoot me on my leg and my hand.

 I was lie on the floor with a little bit air, they take me to the police car, and put the shackle, I finish my job, I get rid of the vulture eyes, but suddenly, it coming back, the sound I heart before, is that, the heart beat, it come back, I’ll live with it for the rest of my life.  

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 27 hint and foreshadowing

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Isaac Yu

May 21, 2013

Hint and foreshadowing

 The story the tell- tale heart is a story include a lot of irony, but how can we know the narrator is sane or insane.

  I think the narrator is insane because, in page 57 the first paragraph, he also saying I am not crazy, but mostly, the normal people won’t kill anyone because of their eues or any other appearance, but the narrator act opposite way, he want to kill the old man live with him, because of his vulture blue eyes, so according to this information you can know the narrator is crazy, and didn’t act like normal people.

  For the foreshadowing part, the reason why we can know in the future he going to kill the man because in page 56 the last paragraph he say about the vulture, and vulture also represent the death, because vulture only eat dead things and you only can see them when something is dead.

Also in the first paragraph, he says he can hear the voice from the hale and heaven, only the dead people go to heaven or hale, but he isn’t die yet, which means you can estimate, maybe somebody going to die, or him.

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 25 scary stories

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Isaac Yu

May 14, 2013

Scary stories

  Have you ever read about the scary story which sometime is scary then the movies. Or have you meet something or have something you scare about.

  People have things they scare about, for me, I scare about spider, the reason why I scare about it is because, it let me feel horror because of its fluffy hair on the legs, the leg are long and full of hair, it seems if the spider climb on you, it will be very itchy, and very disgusting, and the foreboding feeing, maybe I am going to have a nightmare, with all the scary spider full on my body.

  The reason why those things are scare is because they give you the uncomfortable feeling or the foreboding feeling or you just really don’t like them with no reason.

I also have another reason why I don’t like the spider is because, in some ghost movie, they always have spider in the dark corner to make it for uncomfortable, and the spider look like they are going to hurt you, or can be the inkling that bad thing is going to happen. So for me the spider represents darkness, and uncomfortable, so it really scares me.

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 24 suspicion

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Isaac Yu

May 10, 2013

Suspicion

In the world there are some things that make you feel strange about it, are you feels good, or not?

 

  When I walk on the street the weather is perfect with sunshine, if I see a man wear a big jacket, and is black, what kind of feeling do you get, if is me, I feel strange about it, because during the hot weather you are not supposed to wear a black long coat, it only make you melting.

During this condition, you might have a guess, maybe the man hide some secret inside the coat, or maybe he hide a dead body inside it, all the bad thing you have in your mind that the bad guy or crime may do , can be project on this strange black coat man.

 

  The reason why it give you the strange feeling is, because he act different than the normal way, in the hot weather day you should not wear the cloth which make you feel hotter, or maybe he is very nervous, and walk cery fast, try to hide someone or try to walk away from anybody.

All the information we get can let us feel suspicion about this man, because he act different than normal people.

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 23 what worth the effort

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Isaac Yu

May 9, 2013

What worth the effort   

   In the story, the narrator talk about Squeaky need to take care of her brother Raymond, which also is her only job, sometime she is happy to have Raymond beside her, but sometime, she isn't happy, because if Raymond have some problem, she will get punish, so you can say take care of Raymond is a hard work for squeaky.

   But the problem is, is it worth to keep taking care of Raymond, I think it is.

Because at almost the end of the story, they talk about Raymond runs beside Squeaky, but no body trach him how do the correct breath for the race, and he also use his own running style, both of the structure make Squeaky very surprise, and Squeaky also think when she retire, she can train Raymond and let him become her champion. The reason why Raymond can race and have his own style is because, maybe he is a prodigy in race probably.

   Every body need to find the thing that is worth for you to do, like Squeaky, I think if Raymond have the talent in race, she can train him, because it is their family's tradition, run very fast.

   

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 22 the resolution

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Isaac Yu

May 5, 2013

Resolution

  When the young woman starts to be healthy, he can be able to walk around in the hospital, but still a little bit weak. The young detective still come to hospital every day, to take care of her, talk with her, say some joke to make the girl laugh out loud.

      One day the detective decided to bring the girl with him to look around the country, and went back to her house to check. On the way the girl is happy to see the view       and have a talk with each other  

  When they arrived the house already burn down , because her parents is part of the rich family in the town, so both of her parents are kill by the bad boss, she walk into the deface house, the door is disappear, the glass spread around the floor, the only thing didn’t burn down is the family picture.

The girl hug it very hard, almost to crash it, she start to cry, she is very upset and very weak now.

“Why did they did that to my parent, why.” The girl cried out loud.

The detective wants to make her calm down, but he didn’t know what can he say

  At the way back home, the wind blow through the girl’s face, she smell some aroma, it seem like her mother is beside her, from now on the girl decide to look forward, and enjoy the rest of her life.

MSESLII Isaac Yu journal 21 falling action

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Isaac Yu

April 26, 2013 

Falling action

  When the fight between the bad boss and the young detective was over, the detective went to check the house again, because the bad guy just a little bit dizzy, so he might wake up and kill the detective again, so he send the boss to the police station, to make sure the bad guy will not escape.

  

  When he went into the hose to check, he saw a young woman, probably 18 years old, she was weak, and also get a serious fever, so he pick up the woman, run out the house, as fast as the rocket, because he don't want another innocent people to die in this crazy house, during the running, finally they approach the hospital, the young woman is safe now, he look closely to the woman, she was beautiful now, like the shiny star in the sky, her skin is also very smooth, and her hair is as soft as the pillow.

  

  The young detective can't handle himself right now, he save a innocent beautiful woman, and now the detective is fall in love, he already make a decision, he decide to take care of her forever.