MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 20 climax

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Isaac Yu

April 28, 2013

Climax

   After taking a rest he keep on moving to find out the boss, he walk in to the woodland to find some clues, as deeper he walk into the wood land he find out more footprint, and those footprint are very clear which means people just walk by.

  At the same time he see a very gorgeous house in front of him, and he think he see this house somewhere else, suddenly he remember, this house is sheriff’s house, which is a photo hang on the wall in the office. So he make a guess, he think the bad boss is sheriff, which also is his superior.

  He open use the tunnel to go in, it is dark in the tunnel, because the door is unlocked, so he run to the second floor and open the door, suddenly he see the sheriff is killed by the other people, and the real murder is outside the house and try to escape, he run down the stair and start to chaise the murder, now the sheriff is the bad boss, he chaise the murder nee the cliff, because there are no way to go, and now the murderer turn back, the detective was surprise to see the face because the murderer is his best friend in his police career called Brian

“Why do you want to kill the sheriff,” asked the detective

“He never care about me, so I kill all the rich guy in this town to be as rich as he does, so I can kill him and be the sheriff” said the murderer.

  And then the murderer run toward him with a knife in his hand, and a gun in another hand, he shoot the gun to the detective, because the detective learn boxing before so he avoid the bullet, and punch the murder and pull him up, because the murderer already dizzy, so the detective just take him to the police office

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 19 my character

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Isaac Yu

April 23, 2013

My character

  The character I’m talking about is the detective called Brown, he is the most famous police and detective in the whole Scotland.

He is 20 years old, blue eyes with brown hair, 180cm, and he use to be a prodigy when he was young, he is a straight a student for any subject, even though the higher grade’s question he still can solve, he has a natural ability, he is smarter than anyone. He also like to read books and make some experiment of anything he want to figure, his friends gives him a nick name “Brown is Holmes,” which means Sherlock Holmes is brown.

  His parents is very rich, his father is the boss of sign, which is the personal detective officer, and his father also very smart, extremely smart, just like him, and his mother is the boss of Doodle, which is the organization to find the best artisan in the world and help people to renovate their house or to decorate their house. They live in the outside of Scotland, with good weather and animal, they says it can help detective to think some problem.

  Because Brown is very talent, so he also helps police to solve some knotty cases, so as more cases he some, he become more famous.

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 18 my rising action

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Isaac Yu

April 19, 2013

Rising action

      As the young detective want to find out more clues in the house, the strange man in the nowhere cleans out more clues, so this young detective decide to find out this stranger first, and capture him and ask him about this case, because he think this stranger maybe related with the death, and related with the boss.

      He asked some citizen live in the town to figure out which organization is the most scary and most frightful one, and where did they lived, and which way of killing people most of them are using, because if he know all the think, he can easily find out the real murder.

      He walks in to the police station

“Excuse me sir, do you know which organization in the town is the most frightful, and the most scary one?” the young detective asked.

“Of course we know sir, this organization already kill all the billionaires in the town, and we can’t find out the place where they live, and this group call MTC.”

“Thank you sir, if I need your help I’ll come back soon” said the detective.

     When the young detective walk out the street, the cold wind pass through his face, he had a glimpse, he saw the stranger, and at the same time, he already know who is the stranger and where did the boss live. The real game started now. 

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 17 my conflict

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Isaac Yu

April 16, 2013

My conflict

Conflict is very important for a story, it tells the problem in the story, it shows the problem in the story, and let the reader understand what’s going on.

 

  In my own story, the conflict is about a young detective want to find out who actually kill the owner of the red wooden house in the country of Scotland, but when he tries to find out more clues, the problems get more complicated, and more harder to figure out, but he knows there is a queer guy who follow him to the house and cleans up all the clues that the young detective want to get.

Maybe the stranger is the boss who tells his subordinate to kill the house owner, or maybe he just get cardiopathy and suddenly his heart break up, and die, the newspaper in the Scotland tells the man get cardiopathy and this is the reason why he die, but the young detective against this solution, so this is the reason why he come back, because he want to prove there is a real murder kill the man.

  Story can’t be finished without conflict, because conflict is the most interesting part of the story and the most exciting part.

Isaac Yu's journal 16 my solution

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Isaac Yu

April 12, 2013

Exposition

  In the country of Scotland, there is a red wooden house, cover by the bushy woodland, you can see the frog jump, you can smell the rotten wood, the red wooden house is empty now, because there is a murder inside who kill all the member, when the police come to busted, they see the man is eating the hand of the house member, the only word the murder said is

“The hand taste like the meat.”

 Even though they already kill the criminal, but police Norman think there is an another person who give the order to kill the people, so he decided to go back to the original place to look for the clue.

   When he start, he figure out actually there is a footprint at the door way and the walk way, but when he come tomorrow again, he figure out somebody follow him, and that guy clean out all the clue he look for, and he had no idea who is that strange guy, it must be the person who know him very well, and know what he is going to do, maybe is the boss for the bad guy, he think to himself, without clue make his work harder, but he is the best detective in the whole Scotland. 

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 15 hip hop language

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Isaac Yu

April 10, 2013

Hip Hop Language

I am a middle school student

Living with my family

Like the enemy

Hey papa, what do you do to my mama

Don’t treat her like you treat to your papa

We are not playing the drama

This is the real world

Hey man

Playing sport make you stronger, taller, higher and live longer

I play with my papa

Never lose it

 Play with my mama

Never lose it

If I play with you

Never think about it

Hey my friend

Don’t afraid my classmate

Sometime they’re just like the fancy gay

The crazy nerd, the hopeless dude, and the furious stingy guy

Something like no other, just keep friends together

I and they just feels like

Everything is still right

And I never forget them in my mind

I don’t buy anything, if they are not belt

Belt don’t melt, like the various ice cream

They won’t melt, like the yellow creepy cream

I wear belt, people run away

What the hell, I said to myself

They are very hilarious, this thought come to my mind

Hip hop is my life

Nothing Like no other, only hip hop.