MSESLII
Isaac Yu
April
12, 2013
Exposition
In
the country of Scotland, there is a red wooden house, cover by the bushy
woodland, you can see the frog jump, you can smell the rotten wood, the red
wooden house is empty now, because there is a murder inside who kill all the
member, when the police come to busted, they see the man is eating the hand of
the house member, the only word the murder said is
“The hand taste like the meat.”
Even
though they already kill the criminal, but police Norman think there is an
another person who give the order to kill the people, so he decided to go back
to the original place to look for the clue.
When he start, he figure out actually there is
a footprint at the door way and the walk way, but when he come tomorrow again,
he figure out somebody follow him, and that guy clean out all the clue he look
for, and he had no idea who is that strange guy, it must be the person who know
him very well, and know what he is going to do, maybe is the boss for the bad
guy, he think to himself, without clue make his work harder, but he is the best
detective in the whole Scotland.
It's might be a scary suspense story. When I'm reading the eating part, I can image a people who usually eating a hane and full of blood on his face. Although it's kind of scary, but it means you'r successful on telling a story!
ReplyDeleteohh your exposition make me feel nervous because you show all five senses that make people can really feel it when they reading it good job
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