Saturday, April 27, 2013

MSESLII Isaac Yu's journal 20 climax


MSESLII
Isaac Yu
April 28, 2013

Climax

   After taking a rest he keep on moving to find out the boss, he walk in to the woodland to find some clues, as deeper he walk into the wood land he find out more footprint, and those footprint are very clear which means people just walk by.
  At the same time he see a very gorgeous house in front of him, and he think he see this house somewhere else, suddenly he remember, this house is sheriff’s house, which is a photo hang on the wall in the office. So he make a guess, he think the bad boss is sheriff, which also is his superior.
  He open use the tunnel to go in, it is dark in the tunnel, because the door is unlocked, so he run to the second floor and open the door, suddenly he see the sheriff is killed by the other people, and the real murder is outside the house and try to escape, he run down the stair and start to chaise the murder, now the sheriff is the bad boss, he chaise the murder nee the cliff, because there are no way to go, and now the murderer turn back, the detective was surprise to see the face because the murderer is his best friend in his police career called Brian
“Why do you want to kill the sheriff,” asked the detective
“He never care about me, so I kill all the rich guy in this town to be as rich as he does, so I can kill him and be the sheriff” said the murderer.
  And then the murderer run toward him with a knife in his hand, and a gun in another hand, he shoot the gun to the detective, because the detective learn boxing before so he avoid the bullet, and punch the murder and pull him up, because the murderer already dizzy, so the detective just take him to the police office

3 comments:

  1. Issac:

    Wow!Your story is very exciting,especially the chasing part,it makes me so nervous and want to keep reading it.You did a great job on this.

    -Vivi Weng

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  2. Issac :

    It’s really need the carefully observed to find the clue. And it’s not easy to chase the murderer’s step when he had made all the plan already. How the quick thinking!

    - Peggy Hsieh

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  3. Isaac:
    I read your all story, and i love it, when i finished your climax i really think i am proud that can read it, especially you character, i had seen your picture before it really good.
    Peter Lai

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