MSESLII
Isaac
Yu
April
16, 2013
My conflict
Conflict is very important for a story, it tells the problem in the
story, it shows the problem in the story, and let the reader understand what’s
going on.
In my
own story, the conflict is about a young detective want to find out who actually
kill the owner of the red wooden house in the country of Scotland, but when he
tries to find out more clues, the problems get more complicated, and more
harder to figure out, but he knows there is a queer guy who follow him to the house
and cleans up all the clues that the young detective want to get.
Maybe the stranger is the boss who tells
his subordinate to kill the house owner, or maybe he just get cardiopathy and
suddenly his heart break up, and die, the newspaper in the Scotland tells the
man get cardiopathy and this is the reason why he die, but the young detective
against this solution, so this is the reason why he come back, because he want
to prove there is a real murder kill the man.
Story
can’t be finished without conflict, because conflict is the most interesting part
of the story and the most exciting part.
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ReplyDeleteYou got a lot of good conflict in your story, and one of my favorite part in your story, is you used a lot of maybe, you used a lot of possibilities, to make the audience become interesting in your story, to wonder which one is the real answer. nice job! -Daniel Tsao
ReplyDeleteIt’s a very hard problem that your story’s character had met. You let the readers solving the puzzles with the character, slowly put the doubt in the story. It make your story become more excited.
ReplyDeletesame as Daniel your third paragraph using maybe that make the reader cannot not get the true answer so they really want to read more about your story, this kind of method really work!!
ReplyDeletei like your character and the way conflict happen. this remind me a story. it is a movie show and that movie show is very similar to the story you write.
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