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Isaac Yu
March 14, 2013
Have you ever have argue with the other people, or fight with some one who say something bad about you? How do you feel about it, sad or angry
I’ve got this kind of happen before, when I was in 5th grade, there is small guy who said my friend and I are the gay couple in the school, when he said in first time, I think maybe he just feel boring, and want to make some joke with his classmate, but tomorrow he still said the same thing continuously, after the 5th time, I think to my self, do I need to punch him and let him shut up, but if I do that I might get detention, but i don;t care any more, detention is detention, so I become angry, just like the erupt volcano, I punch him with my hand to his belly, because it was to heart so he roll left and right, although I vent my anger to this small bad guy, but, my friend and I also got the detention.
Have some conflict is very obvious, because you might have the argument between two people, and you might be angry because they some bad thing about you, those thing are the basic thing in life, because your life can’t always be flat and with out curve, and life must include some challenge so you can improve to show people that your are not a stupid person, and you have all the ability they have.
I’ve got this kind of happen before, when I was in 5th grade, there is small guy who said my friend and I are the gay couple in the school, when he said in first time, I think maybe he just feel boring, and want to make some joke with his classmate, but tomorrow he still said the same thing continuously, after the 5th time, I think to my self, do I need to punch him and let him shut up, but if I do that I might get detention, but i don;t care any more, detention is detention, so I become angry, just like the erupt volcano, I punch him with my hand to his belly, because it was to heart so he roll left and right, although I vent my anger to this small bad guy, but, my friend and I also got the detention.
Have some conflict is very obvious, because you might have the argument between two people, and you might be angry because they some bad thing about you, those thing are the basic thing in life, because your life can’t always be flat and with out curve, and life must include some challenge so you can improve to show people that your are not a stupid person, and you have all the ability they have.
nice experience Isaac, I think you can improve your grammar more on your essay, it'll be much better, however, your story has more than one conflicts which is good. I think the part your classmate said that you and your friend were gay couple is kind of a character v.s society, cause after that you might be more care about what did other people think about you, do they really think that's true? and the part you were confusing that should you beat your classmate or not will definitely be character v.s self. the most important part will be the conflict between you and your classmate, and this conflict is character v.s character.
ReplyDeleteIt's hard to bear the overly joke, but maybe the way of punch isn't the only choice to solve this problem. It's the conflict of the men v.s self, you had been confuse of what you need to do, and you had to bear the consequences for the choice your picked. I think your conflict for men v.s society is just like Daniel said, maybe most of people even haven't think about this joke, so you don't need to care for too much for the boring trick. And the men v.s men is the conflict between you and the classmate who made the joke, he made the origin to made you resist him with your...fist. But it's the good experience.
ReplyDeletei agree, he is just not a men. but his mouth is really strong though. you should punch him when the first time he said that thing. been a guy is not a good things.
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