MSELSII
Isaac
Yu
April
26, 2013
Falling
action
When
the fight between the bad boss and the young detective was over, the detective
went to check the house again, because the bad guy just a little bit dizzy, so
he might wake up and kill the detective again, so he send the boss to the
police station, to make sure the bad guy will not escape.
When
he went into the hose to check, he saw a young woman, probably 18 years old,
she was weak, and also get a serious fever, so he pick up
the woman, run out the house, as fast as the rocket, because he don't want
another innocent people to die in this crazy house, during the running, finally
they approach the hospital, the young woman is safe now, he look closely to the
woman, she was beautiful now, like the shiny star in the sky, her skin is also
very smooth, and her hair is as soft as the pillow.
The young
detective can't handle himself right now, he save a innocent beautiful woman,
and now the detective is fall in love, he already make a decision, he decide to
take care of her forever.
Isaac:
ReplyDeleteHaha!! Now your story become romantic, not bad and it also make me want to see what the beautiful lady look like, why make a men want to take care of her all their life, nice job.
Peter Lai
Isaac:
ReplyDeleteJust like what Peter Lai think, I’m also surprise that your story become romantic. But all most all of the the story will had this kind of part. Because most of audience like it, right?
- Peggy Hsieh